Joined: 26 Mar 2004
Posts: 6
Location: New Zealand
Before Dawn
Before Dawn
Laying in my bed
A few moments before dawn
Staring down at you
Sprawled across my chest
You look just like an angel
Resting quietly in my arms
I try to imagine what you’re dreaming
To which far off lands you’ve gone
And in them will you find me
Laying somewhere in the sun
I wonder if you’ll miss me
And wake to find me here
As dawn shines through my window
Slowly bathing you in light
And from this moment on I’ll know
That this bed is our kingdom
In our land before dawn
For my baby
_________________ Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are! Kurt Cobain.
Fri Mar 26, 2004 9:06 pm
rubyfirefox
Joined: 26 May 2004
Posts: 2
Location: Earth
What a beautiful poem! I like how it feels very peaceful, very natural, and it doesn't sound like it was chiseled into perfection. Thank you for sharing! Your girl must be so happy. _________________ "Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow.
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.
Walk beside me and be my friend."
~Albert Camus
Wed May 26, 2004 9:11 pm
placid
Joined: 26 Mar 2004
Posts: 6
Location: New Zealand
Thank you, I wrote that before I meet my current parnter, but it actaully wasn't written for anyone in particular, it just kinda happened one night when I was writting, but it does perfectly explain how I feel around my partner and how she makes me feel. Thats why I've dedicated it to her. _________________ Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are! Kurt Cobain.
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