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The Eye

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chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
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Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane
The Eye

The rain it seemed to stop at last
Our sun turns now, to shine
I gently lift the curtain’s mast
My eyes behold in kind

Birds stay hidden in their nests
T’was not a sound we heard
The feathers of their crested breasts
Part pointedly, absurd

Our Mother Nature’s love plateaus
Ironic is her name
For she is rigid stone, below
The devil wears the blame

Horizon breaks and I do see
Dark clouds roll toward the earth
The rain picks up, a slotted key
Unlocks this storm’s rebirth

It had stopped or so I thought
The anger, it had fled
Acid rusts the iron, wrought
This hurricane, I dread.

Post Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:42 am 
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Fernanda.F.Rocha



Joined: 17 Aug 2006
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Location: Portugal


Chordy,
Mother nature gives us wonders thats we dont cherish most of the times....excellent writing Exclamation Very Happy
Fernanda
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Location: Chasing a pink bunny


Chord,

That is a wonderfully written poem

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow
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chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
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thank you, Fern.. thank you eire.

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Eiregirl



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You are welcome Wink

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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
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Location: USA


Lovely stuff, Chordy.

Arrow

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Post Sun Jul 08, 2007 1:52 pm 
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Sunny



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Location: Massachusetts


Chordy.
You've done a wonderful job of capturing the power and awe of the eye of the hurricane. The tempting, but short-lived calm is like a seductress, luring her victims from safety. Nice write!
Be great!
Sunny Cool
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