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Eternials

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slippingaway



Joined: 05 Jun 2007
Posts: 37
Eternials

PLAGIARISED POEM DELETED BY REAL
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Post Mon Jul 02, 2007 4:49 pm 
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Crindaguitar



Joined: 27 May 2007
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Location: Brooklyn, NY


Ahhhh - Now I get it! I thought it was a typo! Is that a real term, or one you've coined? Maybe you should add another "n" as in perennials.

Lovely poem:)

Post Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:18 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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slipping,

This makes me think of my flower garden...beautifully done

Eiregirl Arrow
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Post Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:23 pm 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
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Location: USA


Like Crindaguitar, I thought it was a typo, but how wrong I was! This is really lovely stuff! I think that gardens are very feminine things to begin with, and you have gone from a really nice description of one, to something that suggests the divine feminine. I just love this.

Arrow

Cookie

Post Sun Jul 08, 2007 1:55 pm 
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slippingaway



Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by Crindaguitar:
Ahhhh - Now I get it! I thought it was a typo! Is that a real term, or one you've coined? Maybe you should add another "n" as in perennials.

Lovely poem:)



Thank you much. I did not like how the word looked with another "n". ANd the word is one I have coined I guess. Thanks for finding the poem lovely.

Hugs,
Kat
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Post Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:16 pm 
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slippingaway



Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:
slipping,

This makes me think of my flower garden...beautifully done

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It makes me happy that this poem brings thoughts of your garden when you read it. Thank you for the compliment Eiregirl- Exclamation


Hugs,
Kat
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Post Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:18 pm 
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slippingaway



Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by smart_cookie_smart:
Like Crindaguitar, I thought it was a typo, but how wrong I was! This is really lovely stuff! I think that gardens are very feminine things to begin with, and you have gone from a really nice description of one, to something that suggests the divine feminine. I just love this.

Arrow

Cookie



O Cookie I just want to thank you for your praise and compliment on this poem. It means a lot coming from one of my favorite poets on this site. Thank you!

Hugs, Arrow
Kat
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Post Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:19 pm 
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guppyinh20



Joined: 27 Aug 2007
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Plagiarism Alert

This poem was not authored by slippingaway, and I am very angry to have my original work misrepresented by someone who I considered a friend.

Thank you for the kind feedback all the same--I am glad that you all enjoyed it, in spite of the fact that it was posted without my knowledge, consent or acknowledgement. I have contacted the melswebs people re: removal of this poem, since I never authorized it in the first place.

The plagiarist, I will deal with in real-time. I hope. It would be nice to have an explanation, at least.

Post Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:40 am 
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realwoman



Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa


Thank you for alerting us ti this, guppy...

We will also deal with the plagiarist in virtual time... as we do not look kindly onto this type of theft. Slippingaway is henceforth banned, and all her other posts will also be scanned for plagiarism, and dealt with accordingly..

I hope you will consider reposting your poem under your own name, as you have huge talent. Please accept our apologies for meeting under these circumstances. Nevertheless, Pleased to Meet you, and WELCOME TO MELS

Huge Hugs,

~real
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Post Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:46 am 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
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Yes, Guppy, plz re-post "Eternials" under your own name!

--Cookie

Post Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:40 am 
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guppyinh20



Joined: 27 Aug 2007
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Thank you

Thanks, real, for your swift attention to this matter! I have reposted my poem under my own name.

Audra Lord

Post Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:33 pm 
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