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Cold, Cruel Woman

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wanderinglost



Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Cold, Cruel Woman

Some say winter is an old man
To that I say damn
I think it’s a woman who’s so cruel and cold
And if you disagree, just wait before you scold.

To some, fluctuating moods run warm then cold
Never to be certain of her actions, even when cajoled
Others, less fortunate, always get the cold shoulder
Never knowing what they did to upset this fickle beholder.

Like an aging actress abusing the powder puff
Trying her lost youth to duff
Her thick cold powder cannot hide
The signs of decay, which are so wide.

Incapable of bringing new life
She chooses instead to bring out the knife
Cutting off so much life
Causing sorrow and sadness to run rife.

My advice, avoid her embrace if you can
Which means you should have a plan
To flee elsewhere before she approaches
Before her deadly cold embrace encroaches.

For if you let her hug or kiss you
You will have to say adieu
To warmth, sunshine, and color, too
Are you prepared to let her take that from you?

As for me, I know my answer is no
I have no tolerance for this woman, although
Fleeing will be disruptive, I know
I will not let her attentions on me again bestow.
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:45 am 
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lori



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ooooh that sounds pretty minging. Confused
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:50 am 
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Cunni_L



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Not all old women are cruel and cold
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:51 am 
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wanderinglost



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Thanks for reading this, cunni and lori. This winter is proving to be intolerable and it's affects remind me of my heartless, cruel ex--the one who dragged me here. Soooooooooooo, hence the poem. (We've had snow consistently over the past 6 weeks. I don't want to see winter again once I'm out of here. Much the same feelings that I have for my ex--I never want to see her again, either.)

wandering
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:01 am 
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Eiregirl



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wandering,

I would say that is point blank and a straight to the point wonderfully written poem

Hugs,
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wanderinglost



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Thanks, eire.

wandering
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:31 am 
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MdmPrez



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lost

Very clever write...well done.

Cat

Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:25 am 
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wanderinglost



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Thank you, Mdm.

wandering
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Post Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:16 am 
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blueprints



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I like this--the imagery is fantastic. Good job.

blueprints
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Post Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:22 am 
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MeliPiper



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Man I hate the snow too lost.... good poem though Very Happy
meli

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