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Beauty

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Subversive



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Beauty

So fully empty
So beautifully ugly
Alone in the crowd
You cannot be named
Magnetic in your repulsiveness
Attractive in your distaste
You have a chip on your shoulder
An empty swagger in your walk
A sneer on your face

People stop in the street
Turning to look at you
Then recoil and hurry on
Shaken by the emptiness
The bleakness in your eyes
You are there
And you are not
A shell of what could have been
Stripped of all that could be

Imperfectly perfect
Attractive in your plainness
Strong in your weakness
Gently fierce
You are empty of pretence
A knowing laughter in your eyes
A living gem of what is
And a promise
Of everything that can be

Some call you plain
Some pass you by
For your empty sisters
You do not attract stares
No one braves the crowd
To ask you to dance
But when you smile
Just for that special someone
Then the world stops for a moment

Two women
Each named Beauty
So different
One is Nothing
The other Everything
One will break your soul
The other will mend it
So tell me now
Which is the beautiful one?
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Post Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:48 am 
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lori



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as long as both are women and know how to love, i reckon they both are beautiful. Wink
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Post Thu Jan 17, 2008 2:03 pm 
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Eiregirl



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everything is beautiful in its own way

Nice write Subversive

Hugs,
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Post Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:43 am 
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quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:

everything is beautiful in its own way

Nice write Subversive

Hugs,
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Thank you, Ray Stevens. Rolling Eyes

Post Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:15 am 
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Sub

Very clever write. I like it.

Cat

Post Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:37 pm 
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Roman



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Subby -
You have amazing talent woman!
Well done!
I loved this!
~Cheers, Jack
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Post Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:53 pm 
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Subversive



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What I was trying to show here mostly, was the difference between the Hollywood standards, an empty and unnatural beauty, and beauty the way nature intended. Too many people look at the face, and not the spirit.

Thank you Lori, beauty is indeed not always in the eye of the beholder.

Eire, yes, everything has its own beauty. But some beauty is meant to be put on a shelf, and some to be held and loved.

Thank you for the kind words Mdm!

Jack, I am glad that you think I have talent! While I may disagree to some extent, I'll take the warm fuzzies it gives me!
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quote:
Originally posted by smart_cookie:
quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:

everything is beautiful in its own way

Nice write Subversive

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow


Thank you, Ray Stevens. Rolling Eyes


was thinking more of Dolly Pardon and Willie Nelson singing a song written by Kris Kristofferson Wink
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Post Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:36 am 
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sillywolf



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nice write subby Smile

True beauty is what is inside although many will argue it is the outside that counts because they have to look 'beautiful'.

and lori, for one to love, they must have beauty inside.

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Post Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:59 am 
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lori



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quote:
Originally posted by sillywolf:
nice write subby Smile


and lori, for one to love, they must have beauty inside.

Silly Exclamation



yes, Silly. this i know! Wink kind regards. Very Happy x
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Post Sun Jan 27, 2008 3:53 pm 
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Subversive



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Thank you Silly, that is what I was aiming for, and may have slightly missed, with this poem. So many women are pretty, but there's just nothing behind that prettiness to get to know. Others wouldn't catch a second glance if it wasn't for the absolute passion and strength in their spirit.
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Post Mon Jan 28, 2008 5:54 am 
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poeticrendezvous



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Subversive,

This one reminds me of that movie, the mirror has two faces..which I loved. It's a cool poem.

Post Tue Jan 29, 2008 8:45 pm 
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Subversive



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Thank you Poetic! I've never seen that movie though, is it worth finding and watching?

I don't usually try to show a "point" with most of my poems, so I'm glad this one came out ok.
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