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The Hospital

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devil_angel_love



Joined: 11 May 2008
Posts: 103
The Hospital

They locked me up
Unable to move
Unable to breath
They left me there to rot
My soul burning
The pain unbearable
The days ran together
The food never ending
The people crazed
This is where I was
Sad and alone
Unable to show affection
Affection is where I hide
No one can see my pain there
I’m hidden
I’m lost without it
Thrown down a spiraling slide
No end in sight
Helpless to right myself
Hopeless beyond reason
I found my voice there
Used it as I seldom do
Made my demands
Finally hitting the ground
Freedom found me then
I opened my eyes to the outside world
Took a deep breath of fresh air
I’m back
I can hide again
Back where it is comfortable
Back where no one can get too close
Back inside myself
Where I belong
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Post Mon May 12, 2008 6:08 am 
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((((((((((Dal)))))))))))))
So happy that you have found yourself again hun.Thank you so much for sharing Very Happy


(((((((((hugs)))))))))
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Post Sat Jul 05, 2008 12:14 am 
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DAL,

This is a very moving write and I also thank you for sharing it with us.

Hugs,
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Post Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:33 am 
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devil_angel_love



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Eiregirl and Angel,
Thank you for your comments they are very much appreciated. This was a bit of a hard one to write but I'm glad that you liked it. Smile Smile

DAL
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