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An Ode to Family* on E

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Tahllulah



Joined: 15 Apr 2008
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Location: New Zealand
An Ode to Family* on E

The night is slow
It aches with the intensity
Of unacheived potential.

A thousand drinks,
To partner one hundred winks,
Ten sweat soaked hand shakes,
One clandestine embrace
On a dimly lit staircase.

It is all a charade.



*Note: Family is the name of a popular gay bar in Auckland - New Zealand

Post Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:37 am 
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desert-fish



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Why do you think it is a charade Tahllulah?

Post Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:02 am 
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poeticrendezvous



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Tah,

I like how you wrote this poem, it produces simple images that speaks volumes of the lonliness and charades that goes on in bars.

Poetic~

Post Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:58 pm 
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Eilidh
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Tahllulah,

I love the lines:

"It aches with the intensity
Of unacheived potential."

They are so vividly realistic. I've been there and I know the vibe exactly.
Nice write, Tahllulah.

Hugs,
Eilidh

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