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rainy_night



Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 32
Location: RSA
You

I will tell you more I’ll tell you everything
Not even but also..that
.....I’ll not wait a day I will not wait for a night
.....For the chance of saying
............I will hug you close I’ll hug you tight against me
............And whisper all clearly
................that I love you

- Exclamation -

“’cos the moment I hold you to me,” – C. Hinds/J. Hartman
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"Ja O ja"

Post Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:45 am 
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Fernanda.F.Rocha



Joined: 17 Aug 2006
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Lovely Exclamation Smile
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Post Wed Sep 06, 2006 5:20 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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rainy...Lady said it perfectly...LOVELY

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Post Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:52 am 
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rainy_night



Joined: 01 Sep 2006
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Thank you LadyMoon,

such lovely feedback is umm... very very Laughing nice.
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Post Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:15 am 
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rainy_night



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quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:
rainy...Lady said it perfectly...LOVELY

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Eiregirl...

You are building my confidence here. Using the English language (ie. taal)doesn't seem so...impossible any more. Smile

Thanks
rainy
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Post Thu Sep 07, 2006 7:27 am 
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DarkChyldesKiss
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rainy,

Very sweet write

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Post Sat Sep 09, 2006 6:56 pm 
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rainy_night



Joined: 01 Sep 2006
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Location: RSA


quote:
Originally posted by DarkChyldesKiss:
rainy,

Very sweet write

DarkChylde


...Kiss,

thank you for the much appreciated feedback.

Smile rainy
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Post Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:10 am 
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sward727



Joined: 10 Sep 2006
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Location: pinellas park, florida
NICE

Exclamation VERY NICE I REALLY LIKE IT....
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Post Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:27 pm 
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rainy_night



Joined: 01 Sep 2006
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Location: RSA
Re: NICE

Sward727

Nice to know Smile

Thanks

Hope you have a great time here with melswebs.

Keep well
Rainy
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Post Mon Sep 11, 2006 2:06 pm 
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ghost



Joined: 06 Nov 2005
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Nothing wrong with your "taal", rains.

very nice, actually...

regards
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Post Mon Sep 11, 2006 2:12 pm 
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rainy_night



Joined: 01 Sep 2006
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Location: RSA


Hallo you ghost

Thank you, thank you Exclamation

I guess this is were I do not say: thank goodness for 'spellcheckers'

Shocked oeps, ...did it.

best
rainy
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Post Mon Sep 11, 2006 2:25 pm 
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rainy_night



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Location: RSA


Idea french toast will be Cool home made...!!!
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