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smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
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Catcher
In my garden, I touch the blooms in the rain;
There are always as many drops as I have fingers--
I hold the storm's dreams
Fallen like petals
Right into my astonished hands.
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Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:04 am |
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Rio
Joined: 19 Jan 2006
Posts: 49
Location: USA
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Nice......
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Tue May 20, 2008 5:10 am |
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AbbieH5
Joined: 22 Apr 2007
Posts: 155
Location: dallas, tx
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Right into my astonished hands.
I truly enjoy this line, such a great way to wrap the poem up. _________________
"I wish our clever young poets would remember my homely definitions of prose and poetry; that is, prose,—words in their best order; poetry,—the best words in their best order."-Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Smart,
What a great piece! A few lines with a lasting mental picture.
Dance~
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:41 pm |
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smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
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Thanks, Dance, and everyone. This was just sort of a quickie that seems to have turned out surprisingly well. I love to draw inspiration from gardens.
Cookie
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