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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
sometimes i smile
i pull out a crumpled
note, written in your left
hand, just to show me
i could still make (im)perfect
sense of you
and i make a bend in my
right, arm, just to show you
how painful rigidity
can be
the hours have passed,
but not for you...
as you speak
in spatters of
tiny vibrations
your subtlest
prickles felt
crossing
my neck
i listen
and i
smile
Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:40 am
realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
real nods and smiles
WOW, very well said, K... LOVED it! _________________ .
.
light is to darkness as love is to fear...
Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:52 am
fortheloveofagood...
Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
((((((((((((((C))))))))))))))))) (((((((((((((((((Alp)))))))))))))))))))))
thank you both for commenting, much appreciated, and glad the poem touched you, means alot.
Kx
Fri Aug 22, 2008 9:51 am
desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
so personal and beautifully honest...
nobody can write the way you do...
Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:13 am
fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
smiles
thanks paley, solo, deserty fish.... lol
Kx
Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:51 pm
SummerJoy
Joined: 11 Jul 2005
Posts: 198
Location: England
It's lovely. Simplicity of style but giving so much of your intimate feelings.
SummerJoy
Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:27 am
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