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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
Posts: 109
Air

My gaze falls upon your photograph,
The one I took on a Sunday morning.
I woke with the first hint of the sun,
Your hair fell in waves over your shoulder,
Your mouth formed a slight smile
With a hint of mystery that added to your presence.
You stirred at the gentle click of the camera,
As I spent the rest of the hour watching the air wander
And become trapped within your lips.

Post Fri Nov 07, 2008 10:59 am 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA


I always love your poetry, Lilu. This is no exception. The idea of framing the whole thing as a photograph is a neat idea.

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Post Fri Nov 07, 2008 6:25 pm 
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SummerJoy



Joined: 11 Jul 2005
Posts: 198
Location: England


Lilu,

A sweet story of your love - smoothly told in so few lines.

SummerJoy

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