Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 96
Location: an african soul living in england
latina love
my lovely latina girl
you have my head in a swirl
your generous easy smile says a wondrous hello
your words draw me in, with your romantic lilt
repeat those words over again, they sound so gorgeous
your bare legs shine with a golden lustre
your long dark hair accentuates the woman in front of me
your personal inclusion of my presence makes me feel special
your gestures all talk of you
the momentary touch of your hand on my arm in greeting stops me in time and space
and later, when you periodically turn your head and look into my eyes,
I struggle to maintain composure
could I be mistaken, is it just me
have I been building this up alone
oh, that delicate curve of your neck, so sensuous, so tantalizing, so inviting, so …, so ….
your flowing body moves with such graceful ease
I watch you lightly move to the music, as you move around
a pleasure to feast my eyes on you
drink you in
again and again
actually, I’m getting quite drunk on you
God help me, but I can already feel your sensuous lips on mine,
from across the room!
but I think you know that from the look you just gave me
I blush, even in love
no, I’m sure now
that was too electric just to be me
I’m not in a hurry
I enjoy drawing this out
take your time with something good, with something right
I slowly circle the room
and watch you interact with the world
I see you make music
I watch you create beauty by being
my heart is talking to me all the while
it is writing a sonnet of love
telling me of reason for being
I am listening very carefully,
for I am deeply enchanted,
by what it tells me
So I decide to go outside and tell it to the stars
with the sand under my feet,
and the lap of the waves to shore,
I watch the moon burst with love
and give its light to the earth,
with fierce passion
‘She is a jealous lover’ you say,
standing next to me, looking up at the moon
I look to you for understanding
you smile and step in closer
‘the moon, she cannot bear to share her love the earth with another, and shines so bright to let us know’
I feel your passion in speaking for the moon, as though you understand her
and I know I understand you,
for my eyes, my ears, my heart, my hands, my being have heard and seen you
I read this in your eyes
I have no hesitation now
‘can you hear my heart?’ I say
there’s that gentle intimate look right into me
you take my hand and place it on your heart and with a smile say
‘have you not heard my heart?’
I take your hand and place it on my heart
there is no doubt I hear you talking to my heart
and in return I hear my heart talking to you
and just as I feel I want to say it aloud
you softly place your finger across my lips and silence me
but I offer no resistance as you lean in and slowly kiss me
my beautiful latina love _________________ "You'll never be able to dance unless you hear your own music .......... the words on your lips must reflect the truth of your heart. Otherwise your life's breath is muted."
-Carl A Hammerschlag-
Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:04 pm
smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
oOoo, this is hotter than Texas chili.
I love "you create beauty by being" ( hope I remembered the line correctly)
This really sizzles, and the further along I read, the more I liked it. Nice!!!
Fri Jan 09, 2009 1:50 am
Ashelita
Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 96
Location: an african soul living in england
muchas gracias _________________ "You'll never be able to dance unless you hear your own music .......... the words on your lips must reflect the truth of your heart. Otherwise your life's breath is muted."
-Carl A Hammerschlag-
Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:04 pm
Angel1 Moderators
Joined: 09 Mar 2007
Posts: 1518
Location: U.K
Ashelita
A masterful beautiful write ... just beautiful.Thank you so much for sharing.
with my respect
Angel1
_________________ "We are not human beings having a spiritual experience.
We are spiritual beings having a human experience."
-Pierre Teilhard de Chardin (1881-1955)
Mon Jan 12, 2009 12:21 am
Ashelita
Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 96
Location: an african soul living in england
very kind words, thank you _________________ "You'll never be able to dance unless you hear your own music .......... the words on your lips must reflect the truth of your heart. Otherwise your life's breath is muted."
-Carl A Hammerschlag-
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