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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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Love Poem
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I keep trying but I am not so talented
to put into words
this life between us
The perfect love story will have to wait
for a place
at the edge of the shelf
while we load the wooden line
with all realities that knick it
and adorn it at the same time
But should I write one
based on that
I would have to say
it is just too heavy
for my heart to dream
or for my mind to scheme
see, my hands are holding
what I could not imagine
before
and what I can't seem to word, my love
is the full affect
of you
in my life
and I do not even know why I would want to, except that I am a poet
and maybe not even that
when you cleanse me from my imaginations
I only know
that this is bigger than the words I can pronounce
It is softer than the pillow I have had dreams on
It is my everyday, for as long as you have been with me
and I do not apologize
for not knowing how to describe it
as it is in full
as it is in flesh
as it is... with you
You made the difference
no one else
an angel? maybe
a miracle, certainly
a reality ...indeed
One thing is for sure
I am glad to give up my pen
for the sake
of this
and stumble
for heart rather than words
in all of it
But I will not give up the thoughts to honor this
no,
I will not give up trying
to write you a love poem
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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(((J)))
I am sure she will. Although she may be sick of all the poems I write her lol. But she loves it the same. Thanks J
Dance~
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Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:21 pm |
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MysteryGirl
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Re: Love Poem
I wanted to say something about this poem when I read it the first time, but wasn't sure how to get it right. Dance, sometimes it is as if you were inside my head and able to take my emotions and transform them into the things I would like to say. In particular this verse is exactly how I feel about my woman
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Originally posted by DanceofSorrows:
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You made the difference
no one else
an angel? maybe
a miracle, certainly
a reality ...indeed
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HugZ,Noni _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
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Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:26 am |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Honey,
Aww You melt me...
Kiss
Moi~
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Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:05 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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Noni,
I guess we are saps in love huh? lol. It feels great. I am so happy you found that. Hugs
Dance~
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Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:06 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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(((Angel)))
That is very sweet of you. Very sweet. Thank you so much for those kind expressions.
Dance~
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Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:45 pm |
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Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
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Location: NY
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Dance,
......nothing sweeter than a poem of a poet in love.
sighs, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:41 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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Nancy, oh I agree
Dance~
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:28 pm |
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Cavewoman
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Posts: 2056
Location: nearby
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geez lady, you ARE on a roll...
i've struggled with this same purpose... never thought to express it otherwise... you've done that for all of us with this... thank you _________________ " The sorcerers in life are created within each of us" --- Lynn V. Andrews
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:26 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Cave,
So much has been pouring out and it feels good the be in that season again. Thanks
Dance~
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 4:15 pm |
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