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Love Poem

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DanceofSorrows



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Love Poem

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I keep trying but I am not so talented
to put into words
this life between us

The perfect love story will have to wait
for a place
at the edge of the shelf
while we load the wooden line
with all realities that knick it
and adorn it at the same time

But should I write one
based on that
I would have to say
it is just too heavy
for my heart to dream
or for my mind to scheme
see, my hands are holding
what I could not imagine
before

and what I can't seem to word, my love
is the full affect
of you
in my life
and I do not even know why I would want to, except that I am a poet
and maybe not even that
when you cleanse me from my imaginations

I only know
that this is bigger than the words I can pronounce
It is softer than the pillow I have had dreams on
It is my everyday, for as long as you have been with me
and I do not apologize
for not knowing how to describe it
as it is in full
as it is in flesh
as it is... with you

You made the difference
no one else
an angel? maybe
a miracle, certainly
a reality ...indeed

One thing is for sure
I am glad to give up my pen
for the sake
of this
and stumble
for heart rather than words
in all of it

But I will not give up the thoughts to honor this
no,
I will not give up trying
to write you a love poem


...

Post Thu Jan 08, 2009 7:05 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((J)))

I am sure she will. Although she may be sick of all the poems I write her lol. But she loves it the same. Thanks J Smile


Dance~

Post Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:21 pm 
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Honey~

I am never "sick" of the poems you write me...if you only knew how you make me feel not just by your writing, but in how you talk to me with your heart, your mind, your touch, your eyes...it is in a way that only us as lovers can express to each other. I hope that I show you just how much you mean to me and how thankful I am that you are my wife, the only one for me. Arrow I love this poem, it is real and I treasure every word.

Love Always~
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Post Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:38 am 
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Re: Love Poem

I wanted to say something about this poem when I read it the first time, but wasn't sure how to get it right. Dance, sometimes it is as if you were inside my head and able to take my emotions and transform them into the things I would like to say. In particular this verse is exactly how I feel about my woman

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Originally posted by DanceofSorrows:
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You made the difference
no one else
an angel? maybe
a miracle, certainly
a reality ...indeed


...






HugZ,Noni
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Post Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:26 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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Honey,

Aww You melt me...

Kiss

Moi~

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DanceofSorrows



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Noni,

I guess we are saps in love huh? lol. It feels great. I am so happy you found that. Hugs


Dance~

Post Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:06 pm 
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(((((((((((((Dance)))))))))) Exclamation
A beautiful expression of a deep and meaningful love.I felt blessed and most privileged to read your wonderful Love Poem.Thank you do much for sharing.

Arrow ((((( Exclamation Bless you both Dance and cmichelle Exclamation ))))) Arrow May your days always be blessed with the wonderful love that you both share soooooooo beautifully Very Happy


with my love and deepest respect
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Post Mon Jan 12, 2009 12:18 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Angel)))

That is very sweet of you. Very sweet. Thank you so much for those kind expressions.


Dance~

Post Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:45 pm 
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Avant-garde



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Dance,

......nothing sweeter than a poem of a poet in love.



sighs,
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Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:41 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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Nancy, oh I agree Smile


Dance~

Post Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:28 pm 
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geez lady, you ARE on a roll...

i've struggled with this same purpose... never thought to express it otherwise... you've done that for all of us with this... thank you
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Post Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:26 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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Cave,

So much has been pouring out and it feels good the be in that season again. Thanks Smile


Dance~

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