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Working With Michelle

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Cavewoman



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Working With Michelle

A woman strolls the edge of my reality
sliding pregnant glances down the counter to my work.
I wait for her in dreams
anticipating her old grey truck
searching caution to find free wind
and ample air.
Fullness hovers with each breath ...
concentration wavers - stops - comes full round'bout
...watching and wanting
the boldly strolling woman.

My brain sighs no
my heart anguishes in yes.

She possesses my attention
concrete image nor thought exist.
I must remind myself to blink
in the hunt for an unknown, timeless place
where desire can gorge in feasting need.

Ballerinas spin - arms wide with delicate hands
inviting, begging, offering
undiscovered dawn's lazy breathless afternoon
stretching into touch.
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Post Fri Jan 23, 2009 1:13 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Cave)))

You don't know how happy it makes me feel to see you posting poems again. This line : searching caution to find free wind and ample air... Stopped me in my tracks. My heart jumped in that line for my own reasons. To me, a significant feeling in this poem is a deep longing for newness, almost a wonderment felt in the heart again. Rather than the object of emotion as being significant, the deep longing is touched as being real. I love when others or something invokes something deep within me...that I have to discover my own feelings through it.


Dance~

Post Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:34 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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Cave.............I read this yesterday and felt unable at the time to post, for some reason then the piece vaguely unsettled me for no seeming good reason. I came back to it today and immediately found the source of my unease in two lines that seemed to be bolded for me alone.
So, forgive me is I dont comment on the work overall, instead say

My brain sighs no
my heart anguishes in yes.


sigh..............yes, I know this emotion.

So good to see you around again.




HugZ, Noni
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Post Sat Jan 24, 2009 10:50 pm 
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Cavewoman



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thanks ladies ... its interesting the lines you found most striking ... they are where the write began ....

also interesting are your comments ... i am in the middle of both

that said ... its GOOD to be writing again!
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Post Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:25 pm 
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Aphrodite



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My sweet Cave. How I have missed your words.

Loving memory of you,
Aph
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Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:54 am 
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Cavewoman



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hey APH! .. hello yourself... i'm picking up speed on my healthy return to Mel's ... Jjjjuuuuuussst about there... good to hear from you too... thanks
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Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:11 pm 
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Cave

She's back and she's better than ever!!!

So good to see you here.

Cat

Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:42 pm 
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Eilidh
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Cave,

It's great to see you writing again.
I hope to read more from you soon.

~Eilidh

Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:46 pm 
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Cavewoman



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HEY ladies! ... thank you for the warm welcome...
see you in chat ?
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Post Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:57 am 
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melons
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((((((((((Cave))))))))))

Smile Hey, it's fab seeing you here posting again, Cave. I've missed seeing you around.

I've read your poem several times and...do you realise how good a poem it truly is? Every line shouts emotion through words that weave and flow from an artistically creative pen. I find your words fascinatingly beautiful and very telling...........I truly hope you're ok, hun.

luv'n'hugs,

Mel x

Post Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:32 pm 
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Cavewoman



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Embarassed sheesh ...
ty m'am
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