I am not your one night stand
no, not here..not tonight
not ever again
this gig is over
before it began
not here..not in real
you wouldn't dare
behave like this in person
why bring it to me?
why like this?
why allow me touch
just to say there is not attraction
you kill me
with these contradictions
I will be
no longer your puppet
draw someone else to
this sickness
this violation
I am through
Done
...Drawn back in....
Miserable
Determined
I love you.
NO.
i will not be
this demented embrace cannot be
I am not your one night escape
your staged reality
this sick fantasy
I am not.
We are through.
Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:28 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
Gab,
It's good to see your poetry. I like the determination and confidence in this poem! You go girl
Dance~
Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:23 pm
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
Gabe,
This poem is tight. By that I mean the words are held together tautly by the spaces in between them. Perhaps that's the determination that Dance found, too.
In any case, very nice write!
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