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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
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Impressing
I pull you by the corners
of your suede jacket
Come to me
I bury my face into your neck,
your baby-woman curls, impressing
their waves onto my cheek
Warm to me
I feel the fullness of our palms,
Holding, imprinting their signatures
onto the wings of our backs
Descend into me
The rise and fall of our sighs, corresponding…
You are so… utterly,
Real to me
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:40 pm |
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pharos
Joined: 21 Jun 2009
Posts: 583
Location: Australia
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K, this is one of your most romantic and tender poems... I love it!
Pharos
hugs
xxx
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Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:45 am |
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Eilidh
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Joined: 09 Apr 2005
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K,
I particularly love the lines:
quote:
Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
I feel the fullness of our palms,
Holding, imprinting their signatures
onto the wings of our backs
It's always such a treat to read your work.
~Eilidh
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Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:20 pm |
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
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(((((((((((Pharos)))))))))))))) *smiles* ty... xx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:28 pm |
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
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Eil, I struggled hardest to get that 'just so' - so i'm glad it worked for you, ty for your kind and encouraging words.
Kx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:30 pm |
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smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
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Sweet!
(did I just call a K poem "sweet"? I did, didn't I?)
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Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:13 am |
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
Posts: 2777
Location: deleted
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Just had to come back for a dose of ur poems....they do something to my brain i never could quite put a finger on
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 10:21 am |
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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
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Just *smiles*
~Kx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:02 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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"The rise and fall of our sighs, corresponding…
You are so… utterly,
Real to me"
This absolutely says it all! Great poem.
Dance~
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