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Eilidh
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Census

Crunching welfare checks and housing projects,
We drink yerba matι brewed with a smidgen milk
As we map reds,
…………...………………. yellows,
………………………..………………………. browns
Across stolen lands.


Last edited by Eilidh on Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:09 am; edited 1 time in total

Post Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:04 pm 
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This snippet makes me want to know the story behind it.




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Post Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:20 pm 
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Eilidh
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MG,

The short story is that I was thinking about the disparities between the people who collect the [U.S.] census data, the people who map the data, and the people who "are" the data. There's also more than a pinch of cynicism thrown into the mix.

As always, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

~Eilidh

Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:07 am 
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another cool snippet. like the idea of mapping colors as two people go through something together.

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Thank you, Eda. (See, another snippet Wink

~Eilidh

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