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First Date

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MysteryGirl
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First Date

Take time dressing

With hair messing

Brand new leather jacket

Nerves are fraying

Mirror saying

You look the total packet



Lightning cracking

Storm clouds blackening

Rain starts pelting down

Strong winds blowing

Trees are throwing

Leaves upon the ground



Thunder crashing

Wind gusts lashing

Cars out on the street

Rain now pouring

Anxiety soaring

How long till we meet?



Gutters overflowing

Diving’s hard-going

Can’t see a bloody thing

Windscreen fogged up

Ground all sogged up

What more can this night bring?



Rain not ceasing

Heartbeat increasing

Puddles more like lakes

Moron tail-gating

Feels like ice skating

One skid is all it takes



Arrive white-knuckling

Knees half buckling

Running through the rain

Restaurant flooded

Hope new budded

Washes down the drain



She’s resourceful

Says, of course we’ll

Find another place

Be it Vietnamese

Thai or Lebanese

Confidence on her face



Laughing, joking

Shoes are soaking

Straggling down the street

Cell phone ringing

Good news bringing

Mexicans where we’ll eat



Hours of talking

Soon we’re walking

Back to find our cars

Standing there snuggling

Kissing and hugging

Under rain-washed stars



Agonized pondering

Anguished wondering

Could that be the end

Emails zinging

My heart’s singing

Hi, wanna do it again?
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Post Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:49 pm 
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MG

Clever, very clever!!

Cat

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Very Happy Why thank you Mdm. LOL I didn't think anyone had seen this tucked away down here. True story, believe me!




Hugz, MG
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Love it!

Hugs,
Star
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Cause then I'd never know
What I could be missing
But I’m missing way too much
So when do I give up, what I’ve been wishing for.

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Very Happy Thanks Starry one. LOL not a first date you forget in a hurry!






HugZ, MG
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Eilidh
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white-knuckling
knees buckling
.
rain-washed stars

These are the words I'll most remember from this poem. I love the little turns of phrases.

Hugs,
Eilidh

Post Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:35 pm 
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Very Happy thanks Eil. I was pretty fond of 'rain-washed' stars myself!





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