Joined: 05 Aug 2007
Posts: 523
Location: swindon - uk
Eternal Dance
It has begun with a touch, a smile a moment shared
Untamed emotions for which we were unprepared
You lead with your, hand in the small of my back
Lost looking into eyes of ivory black
Aesthetically, you command style
I become the muse of the dance for a while
Rhythmically we step, movements pulsating
The warmth of your hand I am embracing
Fingers entwined, bodies moving in time
Hearts pounding to their internal rhyme
In every breath, every step, every beat
With each twist and turn we feel complete
We’ve succumb to the hypnotic trance
Lovers gone astray in life's eternal dance
Lovely, Jade!
Your particular combination of words remind me of a mixture of two other poems or songs or ... something; I can't quite put my finger on the titles, but I'll let you know when I do!
Great work
~Eilidh
Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:59 pm
jade547
Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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Location: swindon - uk
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