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The Unspoken Us
Do you... notice that...
Thick black diagonal line
I consistently draw across
My sphinx-like eyes,
And the way
I rarely look
directly at you?
Do you... recognise ...
Each shallow breath, and
The way my half-opened
Mouth is... tensely poised
Only...
The waiting, that is...
stopping me?
Do you... want to...
Take my right hand,
The one, I am, resting
My angular jaw on, caress
my soft skin, to show
How much you do
hold,
All of me... oh so gently?
Do you... sense the...
Fragrant, swirling rush of
Pine needles, protecting, the
Fragile part of us, and the love
Of...
Me, that sits, oh so, quietly
At your adorning, humble feet?
Yes, you do... know...
The emptiness generated
From gathering never-ending
Clues, and
of my silent need to
Rest
in the oasis of your
Unique and calming cool...
- Thank you
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'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:06 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
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Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
I enjoyed the overall feeling I got from reading this piece Forthe, sometimes it's not necessary to understand each individual phrase.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:14 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
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(((((((((((J))))))))))))))) i know you do... xxx
and yes MG, i realised it is the overall feeling, that matters, ty... xxx
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:54 pm
desert-fish
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fascinates me this unique expression of you always
Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:02 pm
simply
Joined: 14 Apr 2007
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Hi forthelove, my this is an amazing write.. Probably hittIng close 2 home right now, going thru something like this currently. She's driving me insane! Thanks 4 expressing. Take care of u. Simply _________________ ....Take Care....
Thu May 03, 2012 9:01 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
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Location: loves land of plenty
Thank you xxx i was just re-reading this, and reminded how raw that feeling is when you need to 'know' xxx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
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