Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Fantasy Fiction
Am I your instinct?
Your sugar-frenzied nose
inhaling the scent of fresh-baked
apple pie that trails you
out of harm’s way?
Am I your homing pigeon?
Your first-hand bird
pecking you from the plague,
flanking your wing through
a hawk zone until we reach lucid skies?
Am I your rock?
Your skipped stone
that grazes the circumference
of your memory and ceases to drown
below the surface?
Am I your dream?
Do I live in the fluff of your pillow,
bloom from the subconscious, and
transform from fiber into fantasy
as you sleep under red
silken sheets?
Last edited by EverydayAngelKarie on Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:59 am; edited 1 time in total
Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:05 pm
MysteryGirl Moderators
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
EDA, you paint a beutiful picture of someone that we would all, at times, like to be for someone else.
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Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:32 pm
brachingritualz
Joined: 31 Mar 2007
Posts: 248
Sweet and well desciptive, definatley made me think of wanting to be all those things and more for someone. _________________ shemovesme.wordpress.com
Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:16 am
EverydayAngelKarie
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Thanks, brach, and MG. It's gone through a few edits and is now published in a magazine. Glad you enjoyed it.
Tue Dec 11, 2012 10:02 pm
ae
Joined: 17 Sep 2006
Posts: 1025
Location: that tragic backwater, the gulf coast of florida
Funny, I took it a little more darkly...
....happens some times with these organic pieces.
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Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:28 pm
EverydayAngelKarie
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
ae, it indeed is a bit dark. you and i both tend to pick up on the dark themes in poetry. darkness is one of the best qualities in poetry. that said, please post some new poetry. i'd love to read more of your work! -Karie
Fri Mar 01, 2013 8:16 am
CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
EAK, I like a lot..
Does she want/need me the way I want/need her....always tough
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