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Come On

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smart_cookie



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Come On

Come on.

that's what my friends say.

They say,

girl,

go conquer Egypt, or something.

Get a ring for every finger.

Did you know,

those are not Nile crocodiles

doing the old snap and roll

in the shallows;

those are my old loves.

Talk to them.

See what I'm about, on my good days.



I still have them sometimes.

(good days, I mean.)

but the nights have gone molasses black for me,

though not half as sweet.

If you could love me,

then why won't you love me

like you did

the first time?

Come on, baby,

I need so little, and you possess so much--

every toss of your hair moves the planets.



Come on.

that's what my friends say.

They say,

do that strut, like you used to do.

But that was before I went so girl-weak and needy.

That was before I knew how you could please me.

Before the fall.

Before I met you.

Post Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:16 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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COme ON

"but the nights have gone molasses black for me,

though not half as sweet"



Mmmmm.....but it sure is sweet for us to have you back on these boards Ms Cookie. It ought to be a medical condition,hey?.....'girl-weak and needy'








HugZ, MG
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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
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Cookie: girl weak and needy, no way we can stop that heart: I need so little, and you possess so much--

every toss of your hair moves the planets.

you just put into words feelings almost too big to be defined, and you did it in such a beautiful way. Thank you

I'm an old romantic and I just love this stuff!

CindyT

Post Fri Mar 01, 2013 1:57 pm 
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melons
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((((((Cookie))))))

I absolutely loved this; the flow, the words, the meanings.....image rich and beautiful. Thanks for sharing Smile

Luv'n'hugs,
Melx

Post Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:42 pm 
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melons
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...meant to say...I just read this to Cat over the phone and she loved it too Very Happy
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