We sleep, the night, deep in our dreams.
My body busy with turning
arrests at your touch to soothe.
Small awakening wonder:
I am not alone in the universe.
Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:47 pm
smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
Mmm, nice feeling.
Fri Mar 08, 2013 1:24 am
CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
Thanks Cookie... I am getting there.... with being able to evoc (sp?) a feeling, setting and so forth. When I started writing again (after an early retirement and mid-life angst) everything that came out was sexually textural and now I am finding my groove with feminist commentary as in "I Have MY Stick".
Now I just want to pour it all out and pick up structure where it works and makes sense to me in relation to what I am trying to say. Yes, I want to create poetry and other writing that is meaningful to me but I also desire to write in a universal way that other women can relate to.
Something tells me you are professional at this and Mels is another way in which you share... I also saw a comment about a blog you author...is that something I would need to be invited by you to participate in? I would love to...please feel free to PM me here...
Thanks again for your interest and comments,
PS: tell me the types of writing you are interested in, I'll dig down into my "anceint locker" and see what I can dredge up to share with you...
CindyT
~We cannot choose what we are free to love~
Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:06 pm
EverydayAngelKarie
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
Hey Cindy,
I quite enjoyed reading this. concise yet so detailed. successful short piece.
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