I've captured every special word you've ever whispered to me,
let them become the truth of my dreams, playing our symphony;
I've wondered at your beauty, felt our shared love interlace
and opened my heart further to feel your wondrous embrace.
I've laid beneath a darkened sky, counted a thousand stars,
contemplated the melody that serenades this love of ours;
I've felt the depth of passion that spreads from you to me
now embossed on my heart and ingrained in my memory.
I want to take your lovely hand and raise it to my breast,
let you feel this lovers beat resounding from my chest;
watch you as you look at me and say you love me too,
see and feel the beauty of being the one loved by you
....and you'll know you are my Valentine every day of every year
when you kiss the tune of happiness within each loving tear.
I love you baby, Happy Valentines Day
Your lover,
Mel xxx
Tue Feb 13, 2007 11:48 pm
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Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:35 am
Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
Mel
This is so very beautiful, I absolutely love it and love you.
Thank you for this gift of your love...I can't read this without crying. You touch my heart and soul with your wonderful words.
I feel so fortunate that you wrote this for me. I wish I could reply in verse to you, but we all know my challenges in writing poetry.
I love you Mel, more than you know.
Happy Valentine's Day!!!!
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Posts: 5094
Location: Scotland
Fearless Leader, you have a lovely turn of phrase, and this is a fitting tribute to a beautiful lady.
Mb
xx
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Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:11 am
wildcherokee
Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 80
Location: kansas
Melons,
You said it all. It's great to have someone to love and share those feelings
with.
Sat Feb 17, 2007 7:45 am
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((Bde)))))))
quote:Originally posted by BdeCaunteton:
awwwww beautiful, mel!! Catty is so lucky.
You know..... I think I'm the lucky one
Glad you liked it,
hugs,
Mel
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:08 pm
melons Site Admin
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Posts: 2371
(((((((Chris))))))
quote:Originally posted by chris:
lovely melons
Thank you for stopping by to read my Valentine for Cat, glad you liked it
hugs,
Mel
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:09 pm
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Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
(((((((((Mair))))))))
quote:Originally posted by Mairi bheag:
Fearless Leader, you have a lovely turn of phrase, and this is a fitting tribute to a beautiful lady.
Mb
xx
She definitely is beautiful and for you to say this is a fitting tribute means a lot, thank you for your kind words...
hugs,
Mel x
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:11 pm
melons Site Admin
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Posts: 2371
((((((wildcherokee))))))
quote:Originally posted by wildcherokee:
Melons,
You said it all. It's great to have someone to love and share those feelings
with.
yes, you are right, having the love of the woman I love is great....more than great...it's absofrigginlutely marevelous and I'm walking on cloud nine all day every day
Thanks for stopping by to read my Valentine for Cat, it's much appreciated,
hugs,
Mel x
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:14 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
My Dearest Cat,
quote:Originally posted by Mdm Prez:
This is so very beautiful, I absolutely love it and love you.
Thank you for this gift of your love...I can't read this without crying. You touch my heart and soul with your wonderful words.
I feel so fortunate that you wrote this for me. I wish I could reply in verse to you, but we all know my challenges in writing poetry.
I love you Mel, more than you know.
Happy Valentine's Day!!!!
Cat
I hope your tears were tears of joy, baby and if I touch your heart and soul with my words it's because you've touched my heart and soul in every way imaginable.
There are not enough words to describe the beauty of being loved by you, my dear Cat, not enough words to convey how much you mean to me. I can never describe the intense closeness, depth of passion, understanding, desire, laughter (and so much more) that exists between us...I feel like you're with me, a part of me in everything I do and everywhere I go....I carry you in my heart always and your love is wonderful, cherished and wanted so very much.
I absolutely adore you, Cat and our Valentines day was amazing.... how does it go, Ba Da Bing, Ba Da Boom You don't have to reply in verse for me baby, your heart sings to mine in everything you do and everything you say.
I'm yours and I love you with all of me,
Your Mel xoxox
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:30 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
ANOTHER HAPP?Y VALENTINES MY DARLING....
Sweetheart,
I bumped this to the top too......because this is how I feel
I love you my darling,
Forever Your Mel.
xoxoxo xoxoxoxo
Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:36 am
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
bumping to the top
Happy Valentines day my darling Cat xxxx
Tue Feb 14, 2017 8:22 am
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
Bumping to the top
Bumping to the top.
I love you Cat.
Your Mel xoxox
Mon Feb 14, 2022 2:05 pm
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Mel,
I love this! It has been so long since I was in good poetic company. So refreshing to still see your poetic syllables fall down upon the pages of such a sweet and cherished day.
>-hugs-< _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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