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Eiregirl
Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny
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until love is found
hungry lust will get me through
this day wanting you _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:53 am |
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Cunni_L
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 989
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hungry lust will get me through
this day wanting you
say you love me too
_________________ A true friend stabs you in the front.
Oscar Wilde
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:17 pm |
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Alpenglow
Joined: 02 Feb 2007
Posts: 607
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:34 am |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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say you love me too
I think I already do
despite your lies
and still i cling to you _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:00 pm |
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Cunni_L
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 989
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despite your lies
and still i cling to you
forgetting what's true
_________________ A true friend stabs you in the front.
Oscar Wilde
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:08 pm |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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and still i cling to you
forgetting what's true
but look a little deeper _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:05 pm |
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Lilac Lure
Joined: 10 Jul 2007
Posts: 54
Location: South Jersey Shore
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forgetting what's true
but look a little deeper
you'll find a surprise _________________ Lilac
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:15 pm |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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but look a little deeper
you'll find a surprise
as deeper love often approaches in guise _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:04 pm |
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Cunni_L
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 989
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Okay I think the way to proceed, after looking this thread over is once the haiku gets a third line is the next person starts a whole new one because other wise we deviate fro the haiku:
5 syllable first line
7 syllable second line
5 syllable third line
so having said so:
Your eyes turn me on
_________________ A true friend stabs you in the front.
Oscar Wilde
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 3:14 am |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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Your eyes turn me on
i see into your soul _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 7:04 pm |
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Cunni_L
Joined: 01 Sep 2006
Posts: 989
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Your eyes turn me on
i see into your soul
beauty, it unfolds
Someone starts a new one now: . . . _________________ A true friend stabs you in the front.
Oscar Wilde
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:00 am |
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Lilac Lure
Joined: 10 Jul 2007
Posts: 54
Location: South Jersey Shore
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Like Pandora's Box _________________ Lilac
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:29 pm |
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GenericUserName
Joined: 23 Aug 2007
Posts: 24
Location: heliocentric orbit
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Like Pandora's box
Darkness pours forth from within _________________ stone is not what makes a prison
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Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:18 am |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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Like Pandora's box
Darkness pours forth from within
Release of all sin.
It makes me feel good... _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Sat Sep 29, 2007 3:36 pm |
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