Free verse, freeverse, free, verse, lesbian, poetry, poem, poems, free verse poetry, freeverse poetry, freeverse poems, 
free verse poems, freeverse poem, free verse poem, free verse lesbian poetry, freeverse lesbian poetry, free verse lesbian poems, 
freeverse lesbian poems, free verse lesbian poem, free verse lesbian poem, poem submissions,
poetry submissions, poetry submission, lesbian poetry submission, lesbian poem submission, submit poetry, submit poem, submit poems, 
submit lesbian poems, submit lesbian poem, submit lesbian poetry, submit poetry, submit poems, submit poem Free verse, freeverse, free, verse, lesbian, poetry, poem, poems, free verse poetry, freeverse poetry, freeverse poems, 
free verse poems, freeverse poem, free verse poem, free verse lesbian poetry, freeverse lesbian poetry, free verse lesbian poems, 
freeverse lesbian poems, free verse lesbian poem, free verse lesbian poem, poem submissions,
poetry submissions, poetry submission, lesbian poetry submission, lesbian poem submission, submit poetry, submit poem, submit poems, 
submit lesbian poems, submit lesbian poem, submit lesbian poetry, submit poetry, submit poems, submit poem Free verse, freeverse, free, verse, lesbian, poetry, poem, poems, free verse poetry, freeverse poetry, freeverse poems, 
free verse poems, freeverse poem, free verse poem, free verse lesbian poetry, freeverse lesbian poetry, free verse lesbian poems, 
freeverse lesbian poems, free verse lesbian poem, free verse lesbian poem, poem submissions,
poetry submissions, poetry submission, lesbian poetry submission, lesbian poem submission, submit poetry, submit poem, submit poems, 
submit lesbian poems, submit lesbian poem, submit lesbian poetry, submit poetry, submit poems, submit poem Free verse, freeverse, free, verse, lesbian, poetry, poem, poems, free verse poetry, freeverse poetry, freeverse poems, 
free verse poems, freeverse poem, free verse poem, free verse lesbian poetry, freeverse lesbian poetry, free verse lesbian poems, 
freeverse lesbian poems, free verse lesbian poem, free verse lesbian poem, poem submissions,
poetry submissions, poetry submission, lesbian poetry submission, lesbian poem submission, submit poetry, submit poem, submit poems, 
submit lesbian poems, submit lesbian poem, submit lesbian poetry, submit poetry, submit poems, submit poem
BACK TO HOME PAGE SITE NAVIGATION CONTACT STORY FORUM GENERAL FORUM   Horoscope  Radio  Gallery  FAQ   Search   Memberlist   Usergroups   Register   Profile   PM's   
Log in 

Poetry Forum Index -> Free Verse

Savouring Oz

LifeVita6
  Author    Thread Post new topic Reply to topic
chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane
Savouring Oz

December 2006, the fugue begins
An inert drudge takes flight.
Stewing there, forty-nine hours relinquish
As the bird-like vector drops cocktails
and epicurean fare in my lap.
Peppered with cryptic forms I pass
through a funnel, into Tokyo-cognate.
Scads of skewed eyes scour their visas
loitering toward customs, while I leer
toward the Opera House, akin to Buddha's tomb.
Hastening, uncoiling my nucleus, devoted to Perth
A bound Polaroid of French Polynesia,
a quickly-snapped-shot of emerald Eden,
eternally echoing my lexicon - even in sleep.
My sphere chimneys, bellowing experience,
tallying more sepial candids, inching -
bathed in aboriginal brushstrokes snaking
tender mates' arms around my waste in
a mercurial welcome to Aus.
_________________
"You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:06 am 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny


Chord,

That is wonderful Smile love the imagery it evoked in my mind

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow
_________________
All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:49 am 
 View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website  Reply with quote  
Eilidh
Moderators


Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880


Chord,

You use the most amazing imagery to describe the most basic situations.
Well done.

Hugs,
Eilidh

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:24 am 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane


quote:
Originally posted by Eiregirl:
Chord,

That is wonderful Smile love the imagery it evoked in my mind

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow



I COMPLETELY revised this poem last night - took four hours, but I won't post the revision. I like this "skeleton" of it, though I did this for a class assignment and realized after I finished the above section that I completely didn't follow the instructions correctly, hence the revision. Meanwhile... now that I'm done ranting.. thank you for reading, sweet one Smile

D
_________________
"You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:34 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane


quote:
Originally posted by Eilidh:
Chord,

You use the most amazing imagery to describe the most basic situations.
Well done.

Hugs,
Eilidh



Lil Mozart, what are you doing on the computer when you should be out scaling the Austrian countryside for adorable lesbians?...and when you aren't scaling for lesbians, you should be taking notes on all the things you want to show me when I go to Austria... jk...

... actually... you know, I'm so glad to see that you have reliable internet access while you are there. It's always such a joy to hear from you, sweetheart. Thank you for reading this.

Hugs,
D
_________________
"You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:36 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
Eilidh
Moderators


Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880


quote:
Originally posted by chordphrute:

Lil Mozart, what are you doing on the computer when you should be out scaling the Austrian countryside for adorable lesbians?...and when you aren't scaling for lesbians, you should be taking notes on all the things you want to show me when I go to Austria... jk...



Well ... I definitely covered the "scaling the countryside" part today. However, I think all the "adorable lesbians" are doing perfectly fine on their own. Razz

*makes note to start keeping track of all-things-nifty-in-Austria for chordy*

~Eilidh

Post Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:45 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
Hailei-Faun



Joined: 13 Oct 2007
Posts: 104
Location: A small cabin in the woods of your mind.


Chord

Your poem makes me feel like Alice
tumbling
into an exotic world
peppered
with strange delights.

Faun

Post Sat Oct 13, 2007 4:20 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
chordphrute



Joined: 04 Jul 2005
Posts: 1412
Location: Nouvelle Orléans, Louisiane


thanks Smile
_________________
"You can't kiss and keep your eyes open, they'll cross forever" - Rubyfruit Jungle

Post Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:09 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
Mairi bheag



Joined: 04 Mar 2005
Posts: 5094
Location: Scotland


Jings - how did I manage to miss this one?

Got it now, and I am glad.

Look, baby, this one is two years old, and it is already good, already you, already your voice...

believe...

M
xxx
xxx

_________________
all posted material (c) Marie Marshall, unless otherwise stated.

Post Fri Jan 25, 2008 5:54 pm 
 View user's profile Send private message  Reply with quote  
  Display posts from previous:      
Post new topic Reply to topic

Jump to:  


Last Thread | Next Thread  >

Forum Rules:
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
LifeVita3

 

 



Search For Posters!


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group

In Association with Amazon.com
     
Terms & Conditions Privacy Statement Acknowledgements