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Kewl
Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 305
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Autumn's Kiss
Her leaves are colorful with radiant hues
as children play in her loft
Her sound is rustling .. crunching
as feet glide over
earth so soft...
Her fragrance is apple, pumpkin...
and chestnuts... abound
while the months turn
we can feel..
Her sound.
Her tapestry of foliage is anew
while She sleeps
storage of coolness
is
accrued.
Scarecrows are stuffed
pies are baked
cider is tasted
candyapples are made
She gives many gifts
for us to see
while we partake
.. in.. chivalry
We know Her best
while we feast
Her banquet abundant
and our problems .. least
Her name is quiet
evenings are bliss
walks are soulful
in..................
~Autumn's~ kiss.
~ Kewl /Argo _________________ ...~paving the way to freedom because not all roads are straight and narrow !~ Kewl
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 4:00 am |
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lori
Joined: 19 Aug 2007
Posts: 1454
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very nice tribute to Mother nature. i love scrunching leaves and eating applecake with cinnamon! _________________
WHEN I FALL, I LOSE MY HEART AND FILL THE SPACE WITH HER..
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Sat Sep 29, 2007 3:38 pm |
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~Wil~
Joined: 02 Nov 2006
Posts: 203
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Wow!
Brava!!
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 3:13 am |
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Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
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kewl
The imagery is great and I can hear the leaves crunching. Great write.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 3:15 am |
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Sable
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 298
Location: Australia
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That was beautiful, very. Great great write. _________________ A worthy cause to strive for is to not be defined by what you do, who you are with and how you act but to be accepted unconditionally for just being and accept everything that just is. ~ Sable
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 4:37 am |
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dRED
Joined: 07 Apr 2007
Posts: 401
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Kewl,
You've painted a vivid imagery I almost felt like I was experiencing autumn. Thank you for sharing this wonderul poem with us. A highly enjoyable read.
Hugs
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:12 pm |
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Dark prism
Joined: 10 Dec 2006
Posts: 865
Location: California Dreamin, baby.
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This is lovely. My favorite season too, I think, with winter as a close second. You really tapped into the comfort and beauty of the season. Very well done. Thank You for sharing it with us.
((((((((((((((((((Kewl))))))))))))))))))))
Dp _________________ "Fighting for this girl - on the battlefield of love."
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