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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
Posts: 109
Moment

There is a moment when you look at me,
And all other doubts are fleeting.
The heart breaks,
And mends again,
As we depart from what we knew.

There is a moment when you speak,
Your lips forming the fragments of my name,
When all else falls silent.
The bell rings,
The dog barks,
The girl laughs,
But those scattered sounds fall on deaf ears
In the instant that my name is caressed by your voice.

There is a moment when our lips touch
That fills my thoughts.
My speech fails,
My nerve fades,
And we are left with desire between us.
Your arms pull me closer,
Until I can feel your every movement.
Your scent chases my visions of you
That are laced into my every dream.

Post Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:26 pm 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA


Mmm, what is sweeter than hearing one's own name spoken by someone we love? Lilu, I just love your poetry. You capture a moment so well, and fill it with your own very special sensibility.

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Cookie

Post Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:53 pm 
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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
Posts: 109


Thank you!

Post Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:55 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Lilu,

You captured the moment wonderfully.

Hugs,
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sillywolf



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beautiful... taken out of life and put on paper. (well not really... computer, but still Very Happy)

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desert-fish



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gee why didn't i see this before....that's just beautiful!!

love it Very Happy

Post Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:58 am 
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realwoman



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Re: Moment

quote:
Originally posted by lilu1414:
There is a moment when you look at me,
And all other doubts are fleeting.
The heart breaks,
And mends again,
As we depart from what we knew....


Lilu, you touched my heart with these words... sheer brilliance, and how wonderfully you captured that moment

~smiles

Thank you

Hugs

~real
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Post Mon Jan 28, 2008 2:57 pm 
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MdmPrez



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Lilu

This is just heavenly!!!

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Post Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:51 pm 
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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
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Thank you!

Post Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:02 pm 
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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by smart_cookie:
Mmm, what is sweeter than hearing one's own name spoken by someone we love? Lilu, I just love your poetry. You capture a moment so well, and fill it with your own very special sensibility.

Arrow

Cookie


Wow Thanks!

Post Mon Mar 31, 2008 1:56 am 
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lilu1414



Joined: 28 Jun 2007
Posts: 109
Re: Moment

quote:
Originally posted by realwoman:
quote:
Originally posted by lilu1414:
There is a moment when you look at me,
And all other doubts are fleeting.
The heart breaks,
And mends again,
As we depart from what we knew....


Lilu, you touched my heart with these words... sheer brilliance, and how wonderfully you captured that moment

~smiles

Thank you

Hugs

~real

Thank you so much! Wow, I posted this so long ago!

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