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desert-fish
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When I said I loved you
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Beth
Joined: 01 Jan 2008
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Location: Michigan
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To say or not to say - that is the question
a moral dilemma that universally commands all those that reap love's sands
Very nice exploration of the power of words and speech and love and the heart's longing for loving peace
Great Write very full of thought
Beth _________________ StarGazer
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desert-fish
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quote:
Originally posted by Beth:
To say or not to say - that is the question
a moral dilemma that universally commands all those that reap love's sands
Very nice exploration of the power of words and speech and love and the heart's longing for loving peace
Beth
Great Write very full of thought
Like Sherlock Holmes I quote:
the significant fact
is that the dog did
not
bark
and likewise "I love you"
only seems significant
when you say it not.
It's just depressing
Ty for taking the time to read and comment Beth
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Crazy4her28
Joined: 30 Jan 2008
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Agreed with everyone else...its hard hard to say when you should say it...if you say it and get burned its going to be hard to say it again...
i think the lesbian question does truly become
To say it or not to say it....how will it effect me?? _________________ <3 Lion and Tiger TF<3
These poems are originals by myself so if you would like to use them or copy them please ask first!
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Mon Feb 11, 2008 2:12 pm |
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desert-fish
Joined: 13 Apr 2006
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quote:
Originally posted by Crazy4her28:
Agreed with everyone else...its hard hard to say when you should say it...if you say it and get burned its going to be hard to say it again...
i think the lesbian question does truly become
To say it or not to say it....how will it effect me??
sad memories
hold me in their vice
i was not burned...
i was
incinerated
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Fernanda.F.Rocha
Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 1392
Location: Portugal
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It becomes so much more magical when told to the right person...
Sometimes we take a life time to be able to feel that magic..., Others we just dont understand it before it is gone...
Anyway worths all the wait, it worths the fight, it worths everything when we reach it...
Wonderful writing as usual:)
Hugs
Fernanda _________________ "We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are" - Anais Nin.
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