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mmmmmm

sol-o

tis the magical season of love

Lovely write sweetie

Hug,
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mmmmmm

sol-o

tis the magical season of love

Lovely write sweetie

Hug,
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Indeed a wonderful season of love Very Happy
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Indeed a wonderful season of love Very Happy
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Thank-you Fernanda Very Happy

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I love the double entendre. Something you can read again and see something new each time.
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Originally posted by Ashelita:
I love the double entendre. Something you can read again and see something new each time.
a


Thanx for your kind comments Very Happy

Actually I rewrote it as:


Season of love

S oothing
like cool rain on a parched land
slaking scalded earth
rejuvenates, and bids her give birth
to new bounty

E nriching
as new soil succors seedling
from hibernation
to the call of rejuvenation
and a new life

A wakening
as warmth after dormancy
recovers the hidden seed
from parsimonious ways, to heed
a new season

S urprising
as the fledgling's nascent flight
and the song it sings
Hear how sonorously the notes ring
through the still air

O verwhelming
as nature's sparkling palette
of color and light
douses the senses with opulent delight
in abundance

N urturing
as the root for the flower
serves sap to nourish
all that would grow, blossom and flourish
in the spingtime

So is love
a new season

©2008 Robynne


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sol-o

That's something I find interesting, being able to go back and rewrite a piece - particularly when it is a major overhaul, not something I find easy, I'm too stuck in the first expression usually to see a rebuild.

Bit of a debate here, but I think I prefer the first one - but then I might be biased towards the first exposure!

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quote:
Originally posted by Ashelita:
sol-o

That's something I find interesting, being able to go back and rewrite a piece - particularly when it is a major overhaul, not something I find easy, I'm too stuck in the first expression usually to see a rebuild.

Bit of a debate here, but I think I prefer the first one - but then I might be biased towards the first exposure!

Ash


Thanx Ash....I was trying to turn it into an acrostic seeing as I was almost there anyway...but now I think I've overworked it...you may be right...maybe the first version was better....thanx for taking the time

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy sol

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