Could I write a Hallmark card
Not in a million years
But I can tell you of my love for Mel
And doing it will have me in tears
She's the kind of person who says 'sorry'
When her shopping cart bumps another
Has compassion for people, you wouldn't believe
Thinks everyone's her sister or brother
Her children love her and kiss her endlessly
They want to cuddle with her all the time
They hold her hand just watching TV
She'd move the earth for them on a dime
She's smart - change that - she's brilliant
Helps her colleagues all day thru
Receives achievement awards at work
And seldom, hardly ever, gets blue
Sees the glass half full, not empty
Brightens my day with the sound of her voice
Has an amazing sense of humor
These reasons are why she's my choice
My choice for my Valentine, you bet
Yet that's just for one day
But she's the love of my life
And forever that she will stay
You see, I love her so immensely
At times, it scares me so much
She's taken over my heart for sure
Like no one has ever even touched
So on this day for Sweethearts
I want the world to know
Just how deeply I love you
From my head down to my toe
I carry your heart within mine, Mel
Twin souls - one heart, we always say
I treasure you, my precious one
Be mine on this Valentine's day?
Hugs,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:38 pm
dRED
Joined: 07 Apr 2007
Posts: 401
Cat,
That's a fantabulous way of expressing your deep affection for a great lady. Each line is etched with sincerity and love. A wonderful read, indeed. I hope you both have a wonderful valentines day ((((((((((Cat Mel))))))))))))))
Hugs,
Gel
Wed Feb 13, 2008 5:42 pm
Crazy4her28
Joined: 30 Jan 2008
Posts: 24
WOW thats so wonderful and totally amazing. I hope she sees that and loves just as much as i do. You have quite a beautiful love. I wish you the best! _________________ <3 Lion and Tiger TF<3
These poems are originals by myself so if you would like to use them or copy them please ask first!
Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:58 pm
MdmPrez
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Posts: 803
Location: US of A
Eire
Thanks Eire for your kind comments.
Happy Valentine's Day to you and Deb.
Cat
Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:18 pm
Angel1 Moderators
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Posts: 1518
Location: U.K
Awwwwww (((((Cat))))))))
This is such a beautiful little Valentines * Gem* i just know that Mel will be in tears reading these beautiful, touching words... she's so tender hearted and her eyes just light up when she talks of the love that she has for you.
(((((((((((((((Cat & Mel)))))))))))))))
May love & happiness bless you both for all eternity.
with much love and respect
Angel1 x x x
_________________ "We are not human beings having a spiritual experience.
We are spiritual beings having a human experience."
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Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:54 pm
wanderinglost
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 268
Cat,
Very lovely. I know what Mel's answer will be--she'll be your Valentine this year and for all others. (What do you mean you couldn't write Hallmark greeting card, you're a damned clever poet.) Happy Valentine's Day, you two love birds.
wandering _________________ "It is better to know some of the questions than all of the answers."
James Thurber
Thu Feb 14, 2008 6:58 pm
Tracey
Joined: 30 Dec 2005
Posts: 1489
Location: Ayr, Scotland
Traceyxx _________________ I know I'm in my own little world, but it's ok. They know me here.
sometimes i wonder... ' why is that frisbee getting bigger'... and then it hits me
Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:14 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((((((Cat My Love)))))))))
I intended to reply in verse though words failed me where I could do justice to the love you honour me with. I feel so honoured, baby
I will tell you, I was overcome with the beauty of your love displayed here and am overwhlemed with the love you give me each and every day, sweetheart. I blushed with sheer pleasure as I read and was enveloped in the heat of your love for me. ..and, as my blush eased and I re-read your words, a rush of joy pulsed through me where I didn't know whether to cry, 'YES YES YES' to your question or be like the cheerleader shouting 'Oh Yeah, Oh Yeah, Oh Yeah,' *smiling. Of course, my answer is a resounding
'YES, YES, YES,' I'm Yours this Valentines Day and forevermore!!
Do you realise how special you make me feel, baby? It's like I'm walking 10 feet tall .......and I am strutting ....I'm strutting with pride in YOU, with love from YOU and being in love with YOU.
You are the sunshine in my smile, the spring in my step, the love of my life and I want the whole world to know it *smiling.
Thank you for my beautiful Valentines poem, Cat....I'll treasure and cherish it always because I know the love you give is the most precious gift you can ever give.
I love You,
Your 'So in Love with YOU' Lover,
Mel xoxoxoxox
P.S. Angel was right...the mass of emotion I felt when, some hours later, I read your poem again, was so huge that I was in tears *blushin'
Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:22 pm
MdmPrez
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Location: US of A
RED
Thank you so very much for your generous comments. It makes me feel very good hearing that from you.
((((((((((((((((((((( RED ))))))))))))))))))
Cat
Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:27 am
MdmPrez
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Crazy
I'm so glad you liked this poem, and you were right, Mel liked it too.
Cat
Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:28 am
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Angel
I'm glad you like my little 'gem'. It brought tears to my eyes just to write it. Thank You.
((((((((((((((((((((((((( Angel )))))))))))))))
Cat
Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:29 am
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lost
Thank you for reading my valentine. I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for the compliment.
((((((((((((((((((((( lost )))))))))))))))
Cat
Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:31 am
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Tracey
Thanks Tracey for your kind remarks. Appreciate it.
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