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MY VALENTINE FOR MEL
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MdmPrez



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MY VALENTINE FOR MEL

Could I write a Hallmark card
Not in a million years
But I can tell you of my love for Mel
And doing it will have me in tears

She's the kind of person who says 'sorry'
When her shopping cart bumps another
Has compassion for people, you wouldn't believe
Thinks everyone's her sister or brother

Her children love her and kiss her endlessly
They want to cuddle with her all the time
They hold her hand just watching TV
She'd move the earth for them on a dime

She's smart - change that - she's brilliant
Helps her colleagues all day thru
Receives achievement awards at work
And seldom, hardly ever, gets blue

Sees the glass half full, not empty
Brightens my day with the sound of her voice
Has an amazing sense of humor
These reasons are why she's my choice

My choice for my Valentine, you bet
Yet that's just for one day
But she's the love of my life
And forever that she will stay

You see, I love her so immensely
At times, it scares me so much
She's taken over my heart for sure
Like no one has ever even touched

So on this day for Sweethearts
I want the world to know
Just how deeply I love you
From my head down to my toe

I carry your heart within mine, Mel
Twin souls - one heart, we always say
I treasure you, my precious one
Be mine on this Valentine's day?



Cat

Post Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:41 pm 
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Mdm,

That is so sweet and very loving

Hugs,
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dRED



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Cat,

That's a fantabulous way of expressing your deep affection for a great lady. Each line is etched with sincerity and love. A wonderful read, indeed. I hope you both have a wonderful valentines day ((((((((((Cat Arrow Mel))))))))))))))

Hugs,
Gel

Post Wed Feb 13, 2008 5:42 pm 
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WOW thats so wonderful and totally amazing. I hope she sees that and loves just as much as i do. You have quite a beautiful love. I wish you the best!
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Eire

Thanks Eire for your kind comments.

Happy Valentine's Day to you and Deb.

Cat

Post Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:18 pm 
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Awwwwww (((((Cat))))))))
This is such a beautiful little Valentines * Gem* i just know that Mel will be in tears reading these beautiful, touching words... she's so tender hearted and her eyes just light up when she talks of the love that she has for you. Arrow
Arrow (((((((((((((((Cat & Mel))))))))))))))) Arrow
May love & happiness bless you both for all eternity.

with much love and respect
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Post Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:54 pm 
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Cat,

Very lovely. I know what Mel's answer will be--she'll be your Valentine this year and for all others. (What do you mean you couldn't write Hallmark greeting card, you're a damned clever poet.) Happy Valentine's Day, you two love birds.

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(((((((((((((((((((Cat & Mel)))))))))))))))))))))))))))


such a beautiful poem!


love n hugs

Traceyxx
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Post Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:14 pm 
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((((((((((Cat My Love)))))))))

I intended to reply in verse though words failed me where I could do justice to the love you honour me with. I feel so honoured, baby Very Happy

I will tell you, I was overcome with the beauty of your love displayed here and am overwhlemed with the love you give me each and every day, sweetheart. I blushed with sheer pleasure as I read and was enveloped in the heat of your love for me. ..and, as my blush eased and I re-read your words, a rush of joy pulsed through me where I didn't know whether to cry, 'YES YES YES' to your question or be like the cheerleader shouting 'Oh Yeah, Oh Yeah, Oh Yeah,' *smiling. Of course, my answer is a resounding

'YES, YES, YES,' I'm Yours this Valentines Day and forevermore!!

Do you realise how special you make me feel, baby? It's like I'm walking 10 feet tall .......and I am strutting Very Happy ....I'm strutting with pride in YOU, with love from YOU and being in love with YOU.

You are the sunshine in my smile, the spring in my step, the love of my life and I want the whole world to know it *smiling.

Thank you for my beautiful Valentines poem, Cat....I'll treasure and cherish it always because I know the love you give is the most precious gift you can ever give.

I love You,

Your 'So in Love with YOU' Lover,

Mel xoxoxoxox Arrow

P.S. Angel was right...the mass of emotion I felt when, some hours later, I read your poem again, was so huge that I was in tears *blushin'

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MdmPrez



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RED

Thank you so very much for your generous comments. It makes me feel very good hearing that from you.

((((((((((((((((((((( RED ))))))))))))))))))

Cat

Post Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:27 am 
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Crazy

I'm so glad you liked this poem, and you were right, Mel liked it too.

Cat

Post Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:28 am 
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Angel

I'm glad you like my little 'gem'. It brought tears to my eyes just to write it. Thank You.

((((((((((((((((((((((((( Angel )))))))))))))))

Cat

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lost

Thank you for reading my valentine. I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for the compliment.

((((((((((((((((((((( lost )))))))))))))))

Cat

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Tracey

Thanks Tracey for your kind remarks. Appreciate it.

(((((((((((((((((((((((( Tracey ))))))))))))))))))

Cat

Post Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:32 am 
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Mel

WHEW! I'm relieved that you said 'YES' and will be my Valentine!!!

I love you honey,

Your Cat

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