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Anxieties and the ladies

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Ladybones



Joined: 18 Feb 2008
Posts: 7
Anxieties and the ladies

I've been having a lot of thoughts
Head is heavy and full of rocks
I'm overwhelmed by one night stands
I reach for her with dirty hands
and slurr-ed speech that cannot tell
her I'm afraid but I mean well


Put out the effort
or not
Find the effort to tell her
she's hot, and
she'll never get the
cold side of the cot


My heart is a swamp
I'm a rotten floating log
It's you that I want
Come and live in my bog
My skin burns with scorn
I need all of you; all


Last edited by Ladybones on Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:00 pm; edited 1 time in total

Post Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:57 pm 
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Beth



Joined: 01 Jan 2008
Posts: 336
Location: Michigan


Well that is very different and original - nice rhythm and movement




I like it Wink

Beth
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Ladybones,

Welcome to Mels

very nicely written poem. It kind of gives the feeling of a country song

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow
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desert-fish



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Echoes beth....I like the flow of that...feels like it just came out of your head that way...

nice poem "bones" Very Happy

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Rosebud



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Exclamation

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Ladybones



Joined: 18 Feb 2008
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Whoo! Debut! That went well. Thanks ladies.

Rose, you're absolutely right haha. She certainly does.

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