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Catcher

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Catcher

In my garden, I touch the blooms in the rain;
There are always as many drops as I have fingers--
I hold the storm's dreams
Fallen like petals
Right into my astonished hands.

Post Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:04 am 
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Eiregirl



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smart,

To me there seems to be some hope in this poem along with some sadness also.

Very nice poem

Hugs,
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Post Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:04 am 
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shanelvr



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Wow!!! I like this one so much!!!!

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Post Tue Apr 08, 2008 6:04 am 
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Sorry, Eire, this isn't meant to be the slightest bit sad. Rather, it is about receiving, even in excess of what we strictly need or even expect.

Shane, I'm glad you liked this!

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Post Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:40 am 
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Nice......

Post Tue May 20, 2008 5:10 am 
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Right into my astonished hands.

I truly enjoy this line, such a great way to wrap the poem up.
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cmichelle_0817



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Beautiful again Cookie...I really enjoy your writing Very Happy

Hugs~
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Post Fri Aug 01, 2008 6:16 am 
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No need to be sorry...
I'm glad it was not a bit sad

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Post Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:09 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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Smart,

What a great piece! A few lines with a lasting mental picture.


Dance~

Post Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:41 pm 
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Thanks, Dance, and everyone. This was just sort of a quickie that seems to have turned out surprisingly well. I love to draw inspiration from gardens.

Cookie

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