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Tonight F

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Jesika



Joined: 21 Jan 2008
Posts: 21
 		Tonight F

 Below the starlight
you and I have tonight
please dont waste time
we dont have time to waste
tonight is our last night
before we go our separate ways
a pity this is our last
but what ever really lasts
under the stars so bright
we have a final night
at least our paths crossed
though romeo and juliet never knew our loss
lets feel everything in one night
lets feel everything tonight
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Post Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:38 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Jesika,

This is a lovely yet sad poem

I think the first word of the 11th line should be "at" instead of "as"

Hugs,
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Jesika



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thank you erie and you were right dang typos lol
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