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sometimes i smile

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fortheloveofagood...
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
sometimes i smile

i pull out a crumpled
note, written in your left
hand, just to show me
i could still make (im)perfect
sense of you

and i make a bend in my
right, arm, just to show you
how painful rigidity
can be

the hours have passed, but not for you...

as you speak
in spatters of
tiny vibrations

your subtlest
prickles felt
crossing
my neck

i listen
and i
smile

Post Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:40 am 
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realwoman



Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa


real nods and smiles

WOW, very well said, K... LOVED it!
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light is to darkness as love is to fear...

Post Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:52 am 
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fortheloveofagood...
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((((((((((((((C))))))))))))))))) (((((((((((((((((Alp)))))))))))))))))))))

thank you both for commenting, much appreciated, and glad the poem touched you, means alot.

Kx

Post Fri Aug 22, 2008 9:51 am 
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desert-fish



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so personal and beautifully honest...
nobody can write the way you do... Very Happy

Post Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:13 am 
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fortheloveofagood...
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smiles

thanks paley, solo, deserty fish.... lol

Kx

Post Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:51 pm 
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SummerJoy



Joined: 11 Jul 2005
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Location: England


It's lovely. Simplicity of style but giving so much of your intimate feelings.

SummerJoy

Post Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:27 am 
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dRED1



Joined: 22 Feb 2006
Posts: 836
Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific


and as you smile, she does too... mesmerizing as ever

Arrow
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me o tojite sono hohoemi ni fureta - - G.Camui-Sama
~I closed my eyes and touched that smile~

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