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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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My little love poem
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Oh shit, how can I describe what it feels like
it feels wonderfully pathetic
on a normal evening listening to your laughter fill the room while you talk on the phone
knowing that a weekend apart would disturb our routine domesticity
that we are still - that in love to miss each other deeply without the moments filled with
the usual,
making dinner, discovering new places, laundry, kids homework help, wacky conversations, old tv shows, late night holding...
I feel like we have been together for 20 years
in the sentiment of security
I feel like an old man who doesn't know what to do without his wife
who can't image life without her
and it feels wonderfully pathetic to get caught up in the sound of your voice
the scent of your perfume
and the hopes for your dreams
I feel the heart of home
with all of us here
I feel darling,
from the last vessel and nerve
that I have been given
the most blessed opportunity in life
to share it with you and my children
and I feel humble
for all of this
and amazed
still amazed by it...
some can only see it in words
when I
am tapping to its beat
and I shout... DO NOT
Accept
anything less
than being bewitched,
floored,
contented,
sprung to adventure,
joyfully confused,
at peace,
and humbled
by Love itself~
Last edited by DanceofSorrows on Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:21 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 4:59 am |
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MdmPrez
Joined: 16 Oct 2007
Posts: 803
Location: US of A
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Old Man Dance
This is so charming, such an easy read...With every verse my smiles increased. I just love it.
Cat
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:06 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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"Old Man Dance, This is so charming, such an easy read...With every verse my smiles increased. I just love it."
Chuckles. Tapping my real teeth in gratutude Thanks so much Cat.
Dance~
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:43 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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(((Angel)))
Thank you so much! I hope you are hanging in there, our best thoughts are with you.
Dance~
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Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:01 pm |
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Aphrodite
Joined: 04 Oct 2005
Posts: 566
Location: Hot Springs Ar
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(((Dance)))
What a lovley write as always. You inspire me dear friend.
Aph _________________ I have no fear
fear is the mind killer
I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:59 am |
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Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
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Dance,
You got me so tickled at te beginning sentence that my morning tea almost came out my nose. This is truly precious.
hugs, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:53 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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(((Aph - welcome back by the way Nancy)))
Thank you so much!
Dance~
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:27 pm |
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Cavewoman
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Posts: 2056
Location: nearby
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LOL... wonderfully pathetic...
i love it ... how true, how true
god bless you lady
AND your pen to paper _________________ " The sorcerers in life are created within each of us" --- Lynn V. Andrews
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:29 pm |
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Cavey... thanks chickie
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 4:13 pm |
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cmichelle_0817
Joined: 17 Mar 2008
Posts: 106
Location: Chicago
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Babe~
Smiling....how did I ever get so lucky huh?You are the most beautiful person I've ever known. I love you truly, madly, deeply...
Kisses and hugs~
Mich _________________ Don't spend so much time making a living that you forget to make a life...
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DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
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Honey,
I love your response
Kiss
Moi~
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