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My little love poem

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DanceofSorrows



Joined: 29 Aug 2004
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My little love poem

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Oh shit, how can I describe what it feels like
it feels wonderfully pathetic
on a normal evening listening to your laughter fill the room while you talk on the phone
knowing that a weekend apart would disturb our routine domesticity
that we are still - that in love to miss each other deeply without the moments filled with
the usual,
making dinner, discovering new places, laundry, kids homework help, wacky conversations, old tv shows, late night holding...

I feel like we have been together for 20 years
in the sentiment of security
I feel like an old man who doesn't know what to do without his wife
who can't image life without her
and it feels wonderfully pathetic to get caught up in the sound of your voice
the scent of your perfume
and the hopes for your dreams

I feel the heart of home
with all of us here
I feel darling,
from the last vessel and nerve
that I have been given
the most blessed opportunity in life
to share it with you and my children

and I feel humble
for all of this
and amazed
still amazed by it...
some can only see it in words
when I
am tapping to its beat

and I shout... DO NOT
Accept
anything less
than being bewitched,
floored,
contented,
sprung to adventure,
joyfully confused,
at peace,
and humbled
by Love itself~


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Post Thu Nov 13, 2008 4:59 am 
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MdmPrez



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Old Man Dance

This is so charming, such an easy read...With every verse my smiles increased. I just love it.

Cat

Post Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:06 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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"Old Man Dance, This is so charming, such an easy read...With every verse my smiles increased. I just love it."


Chuckles. Tapping my real teeth in gratutude Wink Thanks so much Cat.


Dance~

Post Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:43 pm 
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Angel1
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(((((((((((Dance))))))))))))))
Awwww..... this is such a beautifully penned write.A beautiful *Little Gem* that i will enjoy reading over and over again.Thank you so much for sharing.


with love and respect
Angel1 x Exclamation Exclamation

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Post Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:27 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Angel)))


Thank you so much! I hope you are hanging in there, our best thoughts are with you.


Dance~

Post Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:01 pm 
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Aphrodite



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(((Dance)))

What a lovley write as always. You inspire me dear friend.

Aph
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fear is the mind killer
I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me

Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:59 am 
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Avant-garde



Joined: 20 Jul 2006
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Location: NY


Dance,

You got me so tickled at te beginning sentence that my morning tea almost came out my nose. This is truly precious.


hugs,
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Post Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:53 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Aph - welcome back by the way Smile Nancy)))

Thank you so much!


Dance~

Post Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:27 pm 
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Cavewoman



Joined: 06 Sep 2005
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Location: nearby


LOL... wonderfully pathetic...

i love it ... how true, how true

god bless you lady
AND your pen to paper
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Post Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:29 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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Cavey... thanks chickie Smile

Post Wed Jan 28, 2009 4:13 pm 
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cmichelle_0817



Joined: 17 Mar 2008
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Location: Chicago


Babe~

Smiling....how did I ever get so lucky huh?You are the most beautiful person I've ever known. I love you truly, madly, deeply...


Kisses and hugs~
Mich
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Post Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:22 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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Honey,

I love your response Idea

Kiss


Moi~

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