Joined: 11 Jan 2005
Posts: 124
Location: In her heart
New Foundations
New Foundations
Midnight settles on us
A tango of words wrestles with your tongue
A myriad of thoughts escape your lips
Yet I lack the understanding to comprehend
The truths that seem to want to spill forth
Then silence falls upon you once again.
I wish I could break down those walls
Watch them crumble to the ground
So I could find the answers I am sure are there
With new foundations to build
New dreams to be realized
Won't you take my hand and travel life with me.
I understand patience is not one of my virtues
But with you I feel like I have forever
To guide you through the pain I had caused
Time becoming my friend as you process those thoughts
And learn that which brought us together
Still burns deeply in the very core of us.
Its so very simple really
I love you for all that you are
For all the little things you do for me
But mostly for putting a smile on my face
And laughter back in my soul
And loving me quietly the way you do.
Mon Nov 17, 2008 3:08 pm
SummerJoy
Joined: 11 Jul 2005
Posts: 198
Location: England
Victoria,
Adore how you convey all your wishes very directly and lovingly for the two of you to move on together.
SummerJoy
Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:48 pm
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
Victoria,
Thank you for sharing this with us. I love your vivid descriptions and especially the phrase "tango of words". I hope to read more of your writing soon.
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