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DanceofSorrows



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My dear, I do not know where I am
I do not think I ever 'knew' much except my own evolution twisting and prodding
the light and dark together
I do not think I ever felt much without the taunt of barriers from some
tragic this or that making me crawl into corners every so often
but you love me
and it heals my faith

I don't always understand that love of a woman like you
I really don't
I know what I am not, how could I have chosen a deserving love on my own
except for fate being kind to me
and even then I know it is a gift

But I also know I am not giving my best right now
and you should know that I do know that
there is this conflict within me about the nature of things
I am afraid of my own ability to shut out
and be cruel to the beliefs that anything lasts outside of god

Oh the rebel in me, the two selves
torn into shreds by now over a continuous fence of life
Suicide doesn't work, it was selfish and I survived
and now I do not know how to live, not completely
each side of the fence doesn't make sense, not completely

I clench the confusion and make it mine as if
I could squeeze some sense out of it
after being chased by it for years
but you love me through this as if that is my saving grace in life
maybe you see something I don't

Read a poem once that said, “Lord the hardest part is people'
Maybe it should also read
the hardest part is also self
in the reality of things

All this aside
I choose to love you better
as vulnerable as bleeding into your hands
and being here as I am
purging forth my inadequacies as well as my passions intact
for loving, and trying more, and more and again and again
to give myself more in self sacrifice
killing the fears
and trusting your love for me

Because I love you this much
and offer you the same
in the only thing I am sure of
that I will not forsake you from fear

...

Post Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:35 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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Dance

I don/t always comment on your work cause sometimes it just seems so damn personal that i feel as if I am intruding on someone in confession or at prayer. But I just wanted you to know that this piece filled my soul, I can't say exactly what it made me feel but perhaps that is not necessary. It made me FEEL and that's what important. TY

(((((((((((((((((((((((Dance)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))







HugZ, Noni
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Post Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:19 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Noni,J)))


Awww I loved your responses Smile


Dance~

Post Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:49 pm 
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Ashelita



Joined: 03 Mar 2007
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Location: an african soul living in england


no words...just thoughts and feelings...words are inadequate sometimes...
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-Carl A Hammerschlag-

Post Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:22 pm 
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DanceofSorrows



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Ash,

Smile, thanks.

Dance~

Post Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:23 pm 
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Dance,

Thank you for having the courage to share such a raw write. It's writers like you who let others know they are not so alone after all.

~Eilidh

Post Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:02 am 
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DanceofSorrows



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(((Eil))

That is such a kind compliment. Thank you.

Dance~

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