Joined: 13 Nov 2004
Posts: 21
Location: Los Angeles,CA
Kiss
Embrace the kiss that melts
your heart for now I will take
your pain away.
Trust me let me know when
it is too much I will listen and
comfort you.I love you and I will
wait for you no matter how
long it takes.
How I love the days when we
are so into each other never wanting
to go home without you.waiting for the
day when I can come home to you and
make you feel loved like never before. _________________ Moonlight Poet
Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:07 pm
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
Moonlight poet,
I think this is the first piece I've read of yours. I particularly like the flow of sentences over the lines. It creates an interesting rhythm.
I hope to read more from you soon.
~Eilidh
Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:06 pm
SWAY
Joined: 14 Apr 2005
Posts: 1560
Location: Upstate NY
moonlight,
ah, the feelings of love we get when we are around those we love! I liked this very much!
Keep writing!
SWAY _________________ Giving myself to others has made me jaded...
Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:43 pm
PipSqueak
Joined: 04 Jul 2008
Posts: 987
Location: S.W. England
I like this, thnks 4 sharing!!! _________________ .............................................................
Previously PurpleUK
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