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Kiss

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moonlight poet



Joined: 13 Nov 2004
Posts: 21
Location: Los Angeles,CA
Kiss

Embrace the kiss that melts
your heart for now I will take
your pain away.

Trust me let me know when
it is too much I will listen and
comfort you.I love you and I will
wait for you no matter how
long it takes.

How I love the days when we
are so into each other never wanting
to go home without you.waiting for the
day when I can come home to you and
make you feel loved like never before.
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Post Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:07 pm 
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Eilidh
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Moonlight poet,

I think this is the first piece I've read of yours. I particularly like the flow of sentences over the lines. It creates an interesting rhythm.

I hope to read more from you soon.

~Eilidh

Post Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:06 pm 
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SWAY



Joined: 14 Apr 2005
Posts: 1560
Location: Upstate NY


moonlight,

ah, the feelings of love we get when we are around those we love! I liked this very much!

Keep writing!

SWAY
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I like this, thnks 4 sharing!!! Smile
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