I could hear your voice in the distance
Your southern accent carried over through the phone
I could just barely hear it
The emotions stirred in my soul
The crack in my heart splits a little deeper
An icy wind blew through making my breath catch
I can still hear your voice in the distance
It carries across the country
It traveled with me from the past
Lingering for a year
No matter how much I try to clean out my mind
Or to refresh my brain
It does not fade
It stays an unending echo
Maybe it takes more time
But how long can echo continue on _________________ "it ISNT porn its EROTICA there IS a difference" --Wolfie
Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:10 pm
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Location: I come from a land downunder
Shay, even an echo fades in time, believe me.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:59 pm
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
This is crisp writing. Well done.
Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:57 pm
Joined: 14 Apr 2007
I Agree with both ladies, it is indeed a well written write, and the echo will fade, but if your anything like me , there will be moments where you will miss that haunting...
thank you, Simply. _________________ ....Take Care....
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