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SHAY



Joined: 01 Feb 2006
Posts: 205
Voice

I could hear your voice in the distance
Your southern accent carried over through the phone
I could just barely hear it
The emotions stirred in my soul
The crack in my heart splits a little deeper
An icy wind blew through making my breath catch
I can still hear your voice in the distance
It carries across the country
It traveled with me from the past
Lingering for a year
No matter how much I try to clean out my mind
Or to refresh my brain
It does not fade
It stays an unending echo
Maybe it takes more time
But how long can echo continue on
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Post Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:10 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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Joined: 02 Jun 2007
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Location: I come from a land downunder


Shay, even an echo fades in time, believe me.





HugZ, MG
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Post Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:59 pm 
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Eilidh
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Shay,

This is crisp writing. Well done.

~Eilidh

Post Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:57 pm 
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simply



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Hi Shay,

I Agree with both ladies, it is indeed a well written write, and the echo will fade, but if your anything like me , there will be moments where you will miss that haunting...
thank you, Simply.
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