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When You're Low

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EverydayAngelKarie



Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA
When You're Low

You’re as mobile as a still-life apple
painted badly on canvas.

You’ve got strings,
a liar’s growing nose
and an oaken jaw meant
for nutcracking.

You’re a billion Joules of labor
waffled into strips of poly fibers.

You’re a coyote limping
in front of sparse traffic on a dusted
road in Joshua Tree with a paper plate
hanging from your mouth.

You’re a pillow laid in the sun
for cotton blend comfort.

You’re a derelict
drunk
on desert bushes.

Post Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:53 am 
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ae



Joined: 17 Sep 2006
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Location: that tragic backwater, the gulf coast of florida


Ahhh, me likey, me likey!

EDA, as always, one of my favs. How is your mother, btw?


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EverydayAngelKarie



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My mother? She;s perfectly fine. Why do you ask Ae? P.s. I've missed your poetry!

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EverydayAngelKarie



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And thank you for the read. Glad ya like.

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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
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Location: Florida


eak, I do like very much...especially pulling in the desert. But the very best to me is that craving of a persons' energy even though it may ultimately be a negative for you: You’re a billion Joules of labor
waffled into strips of poly fibers.

I love how you wind your words!


CindyT

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melons
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(((((((((EKA))))))))))

I love how you blend and weave these image-rich words. I loved this phrase,
quote:
You’re a pillow laid in the sun
for cotton blend comfort.


Great write, thanks so much for sharing Smile

Luv'n'hugs,

Melx

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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA


Sheeeit. Leave Karie alone for a few minutes and look at the prime stuff she cranks out. Oaken jaw for nutcracking? A paper plate in its mouth? Yer gooood.

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brachingritualz



Joined: 31 Mar 2007
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gorgeous imagery EDA, thanks for sharing Exclamation
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Post Tue Mar 05, 2013 6:27 am 
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EverydayAngelKarie



Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 761
Location: Lakewood, CA


thank you, ladies

i really appreciate these comments and am very happy about the specific lines/images you enjoyed. spent a lot of time on this one. Smile

thank you very very much.

<3 always, EDA Karie

Post Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:46 am 
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EverydayAngelKarie



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Re: (((((((((EKA))))))))))

quote:
Originally posted by melons:
I love how you blend and weave these image-rich words. I loved this phrase,
quote:
You’re a pillow laid in the sun
for cotton blend comfort.


Great write, thanks so much for sharing Smile

Luv'n'hugs,

Melx



Thank you Mel,

Very very much so.
Nice to see ya. Smile

I have missed it here.

<3 EDA Karie

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