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CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
Coltrane, Holiday, and Ella
You arrived at midnight
empty with starvation
you said, for the sight of me.
I was past ready
with my waiting for you.
I fed you warmed-up food instead.
After, we heard Coltrane, Holliday, and Ella.
We sipped the bourbon neat.
The ice had gone.
Now it is late, the night is tired
and we both need sleep.
When tomorrow comes we will say hello again.
Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:38 pm
MysteryGirl
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Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 3419
Location: I come from a land downunder
Neat little word pictures so carefully framed... nice one Cindy.
HugZ, MG. _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
Wed Feb 06, 2013 12:36 pm
CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
And thanks again MysteryGirl....your kind words are encouraging...so glad you enjoyed this one too..
Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:12 pm
smart_cookie
Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA
This is sweet, atmospheric, with the just the right hints of sultry.
Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:00 pm
CindyT
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
Cookie, glad you could see the scene and feel the atmosphere in that late night rondezvous.
Thanks, CindyT
Fri Mar 01, 2013 1:05 pm
melons
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Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((CindyT))))))))
your three line stanzas work really well and present neatly defined scenes that can be nicely imagined. Lovely write, thanks for sharing.
luv'n'hugs,
Melx
Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:56 pm
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