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Coltrane, Holiday, and Ella

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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
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Location: Florida
Coltrane, Holiday, and Ella

You arrived at midnight
empty with starvation
you said, for the sight of me.

I was past ready
with my waiting for you.
I fed you warmed-up food instead.

After, we heard Coltrane, Holliday, and Ella.
We sipped the bourbon neat.
The ice had gone.

Now it is late, the night is tired
and we both need sleep.
When tomorrow comes we will say hello again.

Post Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:38 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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Neat little word pictures so carefully framed... nice one Cindy.


HugZ, MG.
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Post Wed Feb 06, 2013 12:36 pm 
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CindyT



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And thanks again MysteryGirl....your kind words are encouraging...so glad you enjoyed this one too..

Post Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:12 pm 
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smart_cookie



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This is sweet, atmospheric, with the just the right hints of sultry.

Post Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:00 pm 
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CindyT



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Cookie, glad you could see the scene and feel the atmosphere in that late night rondezvous.


Thanks, CindyT

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melons
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your three line stanzas work really well and present neatly defined scenes that can be nicely imagined. Lovely write, thanks for sharing.

luv'n'hugs,
Melx

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