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What's Your Name

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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida
What's Your Name

There’s a woman I know works at the store
She checks me out…
At the register
Makes the coffee, mops the floor.

There’s something wrong
with her.
Her whole face is a bunch of scars.
And her skin, all that I can see, is red and purple.

So one day she says to me;
Thank you for the way you smile
At me and not staring,
You know you’re the only one.


All these years I always thought;
She’s beautiful.
It’s something about
the energy of her. I like her so much.

So I say to her;
I think you’re beautiful
and I don’t care about
what my eyes see.


She starts to cry
but it’s hard to see the slow tears.
And with her beautiful lopsided crooked smile
she says to me; What’s your name?

Post Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:33 pm 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA


Now *I'm* crying. I don't know if this is something that happened, or if you invented it, but it's beautiful either way. This just did me in, and I love it.

Post Tue Mar 05, 2013 10:29 pm 
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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida


Aawww, smart-cookie...don't cry...well ok go ahead cuz I think that means it was pretty good. I am glad you enjoyed! I am discovering my voice (I know, cliche) but finding I like using different styles. I am resisting classic structures...(I just can't help myself!!!)

This beautiful woman is an amalgamation of people I know...my Mom, a woman I used to work with and another at my local grocery. I'm thinking about developing this into a short love story with me being the lucky girl to find such a beautiful/wonderful woman. What do you think?

CindyT

Post Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:42 pm 
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MysteryGirl
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I would say definitely Cindy... go with the story idea cause the poem is gorgeous.




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Post Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:55 pm 
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
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Location: USA


I think it's a great idea!

Post Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:07 am 
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CindyT



Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Posts: 159
Location: Florida


You both boost me up!!!! I'll chew on it a while, then germinate, fertilize and tend, and when the story is born she'll land right here on Mels. Cool


CindyT

~we can't choose what we are free to love~

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