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From The Sky

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From The Sky

From the sky--
crows and doves
descended, a gift--

assembling upon
my right shoulder--
my left--

birds who bore cacophony and calm--
finding purchase and place
at each far-stretched arm--

so that, when I sought you,
Goddess of Sky--
Goddess of Earth--

I came to you in pairs--
one part snow,
one part dirt.

Here, for you, my kiss--
partly sweet,
partly salt;

from the sky, I come flocked--
love me now--
love it all.
________

Post Tue Mar 26, 2013 2:56 pm 
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Roman



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Loved it!!
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Post Wed Mar 27, 2013 5:40 am 
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Here, for you, my kiss--
partly sweet,
partly salt;



Mmmmm.... the duality of love. Gonna read this one a few times, Cooks. Thanks.



Hugz, MG
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EverydayAngelKarie



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wonderful, cookie.

this was mostly sweet, little salt overall. haha. i really enjoyed it.

especially this part:

birds who bore cacophony and calm--
finding purchase and place
at each far-stretched arm--

i like the slant rhyming here, and cacophony is always fun to use in a poem, especially the actual word. wonderful. lufrednow! wonderful.

~EDA Karie

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